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Let's begin the write
Drag me away
To my secret fairyland
Where my smile is displayed
And people come in many brands
I don't want to wait any longer
For that day to come
Where we can feel a little stronger
Following the beat of the drum
I am tired of this life
And everything thing about it
So why not make a new strife
And leave the old ones for quits
I'm just asking
To never end the fall
Because I know when unmasking
You bring down that very wall
I want that wall down
Because it will give me hope
That someday without a frown
We will glue our hands to a rope
That way we will always know
That the other is still there
And we will allow our friendship to grow
All with a pinky swear
So please take me now
To that secret place
I don't care how
I just want to get out without a trace
To my secret fairyland
Where my smile is displayed
And people come in many brands
I don't want to wait any longer
For that day to come
Where we can feel a little stronger
Following the beat of the drum
I am tired of this life
And everything thing about it
So why not make a new strife
And leave the old ones for quits
I'm just asking
To never end the fall
Because I know when unmasking
You bring down that very wall
I want that wall down
Because it will give me hope
That someday without a frown
We will glue our hands to a rope
That way we will always know
That the other is still there
And we will allow our friendship to grow
All with a pinky swear
So please take me now
To that secret place
I don't care how
I just want to get out without a trace
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18th Jul 2012 3:31am
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18th Jul 2012 5:55am
Great write
18th Jul 2012 5:33am
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18th Jul 2012 6:38am
You show a lot of emotion in this piece...it's like it calls for the readers heart to listen...I like it :D
And it can only get better you know :3
And it can only get better you know :3
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18th Jul 2012 4:34pm
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18th Jul 2012 3:58pm
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18th Jul 2012 7:07pm
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18th Jul 2012 7:09pm
Shh...I'm working on getting gorilla glue...that stuff well it works awesome O.o
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18th Jul 2012 7:12pm
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18th Jul 2012 7:12pm
Hmm is the rope attached to anything...like idk an awesome pirate boat:)
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18th Jul 2012 7:14pm
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18th Jul 2012 7:16pm
Well I mean if we glued our hands to a rope what would it be attached to haha....and why build one when my ninja fair voodoo doll can wave a magic wand and make one appear...
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18th Jul 2012 7:21pm
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18th Jul 2012 7:23pm
Then I will get you some wood and a hammer....and lots of bubble wrap:3
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18th Jul 2012 7:25pm
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18th Jul 2012 7:26pm
Dude we have glue....but fine....P.S. the hammer was to pop the bubble wrap XD
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18th Jul 2012 7:26pm
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18th Jul 2012 7:27pm
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18th Jul 2012 7:29pm
Well its on here but you can take all the notes you want...you know, in case the internet breaks 0:
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18th Jul 2012 7:29pm
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18th Jul 2012 7:32pm
Yeah or that happens O.e
But apparently I'm half zombie sooo...
Wait, what if I lose my humanity!? O_O
But apparently I'm half zombie sooo...
Wait, what if I lose my humanity!? O_O
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18th Jul 2012 7:34pm
Then it'll be like in Shawn of the Dead...:3
And you won't loose your humanity:P
And you won't loose your humanity:P
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18th Jul 2012 7:36pm
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18th Jul 2012 7:38pm
Pft okay lets go with that :P
Okay after this it will be 30 O.O
Lets move it to messaging or text haha
Okay after this it will be 30 O.O
Lets move it to messaging or text haha
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18th Jul 2012 7:44pm
I think it was enough after 3 of the conversation >_< haha
It is far out my control I believe XD
It is far out my control I believe XD