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fire truck & barbie dolls
look its a little girl
playing tea party with her stuffed animals
i renember when i was little and was a little angel
weren't we all
playing with are fire trucks and barbie dolls
but look at us all know
we've changed all so much
could you expect little angels turning into little demons
instead of play with fire trucks and barbie dolls
your playing with guns and matches
i guess were never the same were always changing
playing tea party with her stuffed animals
i renember when i was little and was a little angel
weren't we all
playing with are fire trucks and barbie dolls
but look at us all know
we've changed all so much
could you expect little angels turning into little demons
instead of play with fire trucks and barbie dolls
your playing with guns and matches
i guess were never the same were always changing
Published 27th Mar 2010
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27th Mar 2010 7:17am
...that you express in these lines, Rosy. We all change many times in our lives, the important thing is how we react to what's happening and remembering that mostly we are in charge of it. This is good work - I've mailed you about the layout. Keep writing.
27th Mar 2010 10:20am
I agree with Abra on this one, it is moving. It could do with a little work on the layout, but other than that small ditty, its a good piece.
keep writing
Inky x
keep writing
Inky x
