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It`s All on You
dont sympathize
with my condition
prevent collision
correct my vision
prod me from
reclined position
Your mission
make me reach decisions
pry me
from the television
Ween me from
each backlit screen
throttle
if I lift a bottle
soak
if I light a smoke
grab my ankle
pull baby pull
til my skull
hits hard wood
that should make me
more alert
kick me
get me off my butt
hold my hand
as I stand up
show me to water
show me no Quarter
Unitil I`m back
in working order
be a nag
should I lag
have no Heart
'less I do my part
show no Love
til I Man Up
It`s All on You
Published 13th Jul 2012
| Edited 10th Sep 2012
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Anonymous
13th Jul 2012 10:38pm
get off the couch
get out of the house
take a shower
dress up nicely
go to work
it is not my fault
your boss is a jerk
you are one of many
who know
Murphy's law
makes it so..........
get out of the house
take a shower
dress up nicely
go to work
it is not my fault
your boss is a jerk
you are one of many
who know
Murphy's law
makes it so..........
18th Jul 2012 1:30am
18th Jul 2012 1:36am
im sure you can in Japanese.
One thing I do as excercise is
just make each line just
one word -- then the next, and the next --
try to go from point a to point be with a string of single words.
