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love
love is a bridge
that crosses across your heart
simply understanding will bring nothing
and you thoughts are merciless upon your shaft
Oh, the abysmal vanity of it all
love is a dead man's gift
it is simple understanding
of yourself
Published 12th Jul 2012
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19th Jul 2012 5:48pm
Complex 3rd and 7/8 lines....this is of course the paradox of simplicity....simple but not easy.
Wicked vocabulary makes it work but that teases out the facts of the case, so I'm buying it.
"and your thoughts...."
Wicked vocabulary makes it work but that teases out the facts of the case, so I'm buying it.
"and your thoughts...."
