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Dream Day
1.
To please you:
like a circuit
calm or frosted
eyes, you have a
fabulous shadow.
2.
Toward the end,
why you came upon
it inevitably:
like a TV dinner
eaten at the "Y,"
although there are
engineering problems.
3.
I sent you a lovely
fish and when the actual
time came: so did I.
4.
Don't think I've
ever eaten a better
piece of butter
and the company was
especially almost
pleasant.
To please you:
like a circuit
calm or frosted
eyes, you have a
fabulous shadow.
2.
Toward the end,
why you came upon
it inevitably:
like a TV dinner
eaten at the "Y,"
although there are
engineering problems.
3.
I sent you a lovely
fish and when the actual
time came: so did I.
4.
Don't think I've
ever eaten a better
piece of butter
and the company was
especially almost
pleasant.
Published 8th Jul 2012
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The author encourages honest critique.
10th Jul 2012 11:09am
a queer little poem which im very disappointed for not being able to understand it properly. Perhaps an insight might help!
13th Jul 2012 6:34pm
I don't know what to say. Thanks for your honesty. It (the poem) has something to do with grieving. I honestly hope that helps.
6th Aug 2012 10:54pm
