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how long do i have to be trapped?
how long do i have to be trapped?
I'm alone
no bodys out there
no one understands me not even my parents
they dont know who i really am
I tried and tried but they ignore
I'm a child a young one
I'm trapped in this world
my life is like prison
I cant escape
I tried to but someone keeps on pulling me
maybe its my past
i've never felt this way before 2010 after my bestfriend killed himself cuss of bullying in school and getting beat at home :(
I'm alone
no bodys out there
no one understands me not even my parents
they dont know who i really am
I tried and tried but they ignore
I'm a child a young one
I'm trapped in this world
my life is like prison
I cant escape
I tried to but someone keeps on pulling me
maybe its my past
i've never felt this way before 2010 after my bestfriend killed himself cuss of bullying in school and getting beat at home :(
Published 7th Jul 2012
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7th Jul 2012 2:49pm
Hi Audree, I've noticed a few errors, and some things I would change, if you're interested, you can copy and paste and send it, and I can edit and show you what I'd do. :) I won't steal your poem, no worries.
