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101
How many times
can you point it out
before it becomes
a fetish?
Fat
Ignorance
Breast Enhancement
Legs
Hypocrisy
Welfare
Hippies
Whores
The Rich
Movie Stars
Drug Abuse
Poverty
Humiliation
Abuse
Gays
Shoes
6 Pack Abs
Muscle Cars
Wealth
Tattoos
Superiority
Warfare
Bikinis
Stability
Fashion
Retirement
Sports
Nutrition
Ownership
Politics
Righteousness
Religion
Behavior
Piercings
Poetry
The White Picket Fence
Health
and other forms of idolatry.
runningturtle87
can you point it out
before it becomes
a fetish?
Fat
Ignorance
Breast Enhancement
Legs
Hypocrisy
Welfare
Hippies
Whores
The Rich
Movie Stars
Drug Abuse
Poverty
Humiliation
Abuse
Gays
Shoes
6 Pack Abs
Muscle Cars
Wealth
Tattoos
Superiority
Warfare
Bikinis
Stability
Fashion
Retirement
Sports
Nutrition
Ownership
Politics
Righteousness
Religion
Behavior
Piercings
Poetry
The White Picket Fence
Health
and other forms of idolatry.
runningturtle87
Published 1st Jul 2012
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2012 9:51pm
I personally see this more as a piece of conceptual art than a poem. The reason is that I think a poem should have more crafted imagery or techniques like metaphors and similes. "101" is all concept. That doesn't mean I dislike it. On the contrary, I found it thought-provoking, which is more than I can say about some poems I've read. Critique is JMHO. Thanks for the read.
Anonymous
2nd Jul 2012 6:12pm
There is a form of poetry that has lists and it works. The above would be more effective as a piece of art with embedded words. I know how to do that as I do photomanipulation / photoshop.
Otherwise I agree with Jack, above. The concept is great and your list is good, it is all about style vs. substance.
Thank you for the read.
Kitty
Otherwise I agree with Jack, above. The concept is great and your list is good, it is all about style vs. substance.
Thank you for the read.
Kitty
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2nd Oct 2015 6:59pm
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