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To The Depths Of Hell
'My love
Nothing on earth,
Above the earth or below
Will keep us apart...
Except death'
Those were your words to me
Said with a smile
Giving me every assurance
That your love will forever be mine
After all these years
Through all the thick and thin
Now you've brought me tears
By your marriage to him
I've had sleepless nights
Asking myself where exactly I went wrong
True I was fooled by sight
But baby now I'm strong
Yes baby you were right
Only death can keep us apart,well
I have a plan and it'll lead us through
Straight to the depths of hell
Nothing on earth,
Above the earth or below
Will keep us apart...
Except death'
Those were your words to me
Said with a smile
Giving me every assurance
That your love will forever be mine
After all these years
Through all the thick and thin
Now you've brought me tears
By your marriage to him
I've had sleepless nights
Asking myself where exactly I went wrong
True I was fooled by sight
But baby now I'm strong
Yes baby you were right
Only death can keep us apart,well
I have a plan and it'll lead us through
Straight to the depths of hell
Published 26th Jun 2012
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26th Jun 2012 8:31pm
26th Jun 2012 9:31pm
27th Jun 2012 1:06am
The music is going around in my brain again. The Police recorded a song called "I burn For You". Sting apparently was the only one who liked it, and when he started his solo career, he recorded it again. The jazz musicians on that 2nd try make it work for me.
Does make me wonder---if there is in fact a place called hell, how many historical couples are there? Possibly King Louis XVI and Marie Antoinette?
Does make me wonder---if there is in fact a place called hell, how many historical couples are there? Possibly King Louis XVI and Marie Antoinette?
27th Jun 2012 8:42am
Maybe,I can't tell for sure if hell exist or not,or who's there or not. I just tried to paint betrayal in this poem this way
27th Jun 2012 10:03am
Round and round and some memories can never die, or change the way we still feel. Felt like you were pulling this one up out of ashes like resurrecting a phoenix. A powerful blow, man.
27th Jun 2012 5:31pm
Why are so angry? Look at how much she helped you by discarding you. Isn't that something to be proud of? Your poetical gifts and talents are wonderful.
marcella1
marcella1
28th Jun 2012 7:14am
Marcella u think she did me a lot of good by discarding me? Anyway thanks for reading and commenting ut I would love to know what's good about her action
