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Breaking
Taking the hint
that this is it,
I head for the door
thinking that
maybe
a word more
and that then,
or I will turn,
but willful
and hurting,
I look back
in hindsight,
and how
I threw away
a good thing.
runningturtle87
that this is it,
I head for the door
thinking that
maybe
a word more
and that then,
or I will turn,
but willful
and hurting,
I look back
in hindsight,
and how
I threw away
a good thing.
runningturtle87
Published 25th Jun 2012
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Anonymous
25th Jun 2012 4:21pm
Good poem...evocative
We all throw away good things
Good subject
Well written
We all throw away good things
Good subject
Well written
27th Jun 2012 3:26am
SLIH....thanks for the feedback.....trying to hit the hard notes.....if you have to experience it to talk about it, some places may be costly.....
25th Jun 2012 8:47pm
Thanks......seeing as how we can retrieve things as content, I wonder if anything is ever lost....
