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Despair
'Just get over it!' they say
I wish it was just as easy as you say,
Suffering because of it day by day,
Memories they always stay,
What I go through isn't a matter of doubt,
I gave you my trust,
But i got betrayed,
What more do you want me to say,
Snow falls as I walk alone,
What a breathtaking sights,
Witness with my own eyes,
I made my choice,
My despair no one shall hear.
I wish it was just as easy as you say,
Suffering because of it day by day,
Memories they always stay,
What I go through isn't a matter of doubt,
I gave you my trust,
But i got betrayed,
What more do you want me to say,
Snow falls as I walk alone,
What a breathtaking sights,
Witness with my own eyes,
I made my choice,
My despair no one shall hear.
Published 24th Jun 2012
| Edited 25th Jun 2012
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24th Jun 2012 10:34pm
some changes you might consider
'Just get over it,' they say
to
'Just get over it!' they say
I wish it just as easy as you say,
to
I wish it was just as easy as you say,
Memories it always stay,
to
Memories they always stay,
Snow falls as I walked alone,
to
Snow falls as I walk alone,
What a breath taking sights,
to
What breathtaking sights,
'Just get over it,' they say
to
'Just get over it!' they say
I wish it just as easy as you say,
to
I wish it was just as easy as you say,
Memories it always stay,
to
Memories they always stay,
Snow falls as I walked alone,
to
Snow falls as I walk alone,
What a breath taking sights,
to
What breathtaking sights,
25th Jun 2012 4:45am
