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Lotus
You held my lotus blossom
In your lips and played with the
Pistil. We took one piece of
Magic rhinoceros horn
And could not sleep all night long.
All night the cock's gorgeous crest
Stood erect. All night the bee
Clung trembling to the flower
Stamens. Oh my sweet perfumed
Jewel! I will allow only
My lord to possess my sacred
Lotus pond, and every night
You can make blossom in me
Flowers of fire
In your lips and played with the
Pistil. We took one piece of
Magic rhinoceros horn
And could not sleep all night long.
All night the cock's gorgeous crest
Stood erect. All night the bee
Clung trembling to the flower
Stamens. Oh my sweet perfumed
Jewel! I will allow only
My lord to possess my sacred
Lotus pond, and every night
You can make blossom in me
Flowers of fire
Published 22nd Jun 2012
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22nd Jun 2012 11:11pm
This is as erotic as erotic gets...
Lovely visul with the usage of the flower (lotus)
y Lord to possess my sacred lotus pond....
I love those lines
Simply beautiful!
Lovely visul with the usage of the flower (lotus)
y Lord to possess my sacred lotus pond....
I love those lines
Simply beautiful!
23rd Jun 2012 9:10pm
Thank you so much for sharing your opinion ... I can feel the inspiration coming just knowing you loved my poem.
23rd Jun 2012 8:17am
i see the passion of erotic so deep
its time you come fully and heal
im impressed by everything
most of all you make this pussies scream
and dicks weeping with white ink
now thats a talent i call big...
congartulations for your first post
its time you come fully and heal
im impressed by everything
most of all you make this pussies scream
and dicks weeping with white ink
now thats a talent i call big...
congartulations for your first post
23rd Jun 2012 9:15pm
Thank you.
I did have some emotions when i posted .. i was like ... "what if people will not understand the message which i`m trying to send" but now i feel good and pleased.
I will post more ... asap.
I did have some emotions when i posted .. i was like ... "what if people will not understand the message which i`m trying to send" but now i feel good and pleased.
I will post more ... asap.
23rd Jun 2012 9:15pm
23rd Jun 2012 9:21pm
Nice to hear that.
I hope i pumped your mind to imagine the most beautiful lotus flower you ever owned.
P.S. please, refer to me as "SideCobra" i would really appreciate it, thank you.
I hope i pumped your mind to imagine the most beautiful lotus flower you ever owned.
P.S. please, refer to me as "SideCobra" i would really appreciate it, thank you.
