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I just wanted to say...
When I think of you
I have a smile on my face
And in my heart too
Is where it is placed
It's true I haven't known you a while
But as of right now, I know
You make me smile
And make my heart brightly glow
This doesn't happen often
Well, to me, that is
Just every now and then
When my heart is newly polished
So now I just want the word out
And to let you know
That I have no doubt
In where my heart's about to go
I have a smile on my face
And in my heart too
Is where it is placed
It's true I haven't known you a while
But as of right now, I know
You make me smile
And make my heart brightly glow
This doesn't happen often
Well, to me, that is
Just every now and then
When my heart is newly polished
So now I just want the word out
And to let you know
That I have no doubt
In where my heart's about to go
Published 21st Jun 2012
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21st Jun 2012 11:19pm
"when my heart is newly polished" is an awesome line! A touching piece :)
22nd Jun 2012 1:03am
22nd Jun 2012 1:18am
the line (its true that i havent known you awhile But as of right now i know you make me smile)its really nice an funny (in a good way)
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22nd Jun 2012 5:47pm
I like this poem..simple heartfelt true words with a profound and wise cast to them..thanks Chrisella
22nd Jun 2012 6:48pm
23rd Jun 2012 4:49pm
I liked the "newly polished" line, a nice example of a new phrase that is instantly recognisable.
23rd Jun 2012 4:53pm
