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Forgotten
It's stuck in my lungs!
I can hardly breathe!
Im mourning and sobbing with aggony!
Screaming to the heavens!
Begging God to end my suffering!
But what for?
He does not wish to end it all.
Leaving me here alone, writhing in pain.
Slowly sufficating.
I am posioned!
Can no one save me?
Will no one calm my suffering?
As much as I scream no one listens.
Even my final wittness.
My dear friend laughs from the side lines.
Does no one care for this dying, lonely soul?
Mournig, pleding for help yet knowing no one will come.
I am forgotten and alone.
My Heart fineally gives in.
I fall into a deep sleep on my death bed.
The final resting place.
Where my forgotten soul goes now, no one knows.
There is no light at the end of the tunnel.
Slowly I vanish.
I am forgotten.
Alone in this darkness...
forever.
I can hardly breathe!
Im mourning and sobbing with aggony!
Screaming to the heavens!
Begging God to end my suffering!
But what for?
He does not wish to end it all.
Leaving me here alone, writhing in pain.
Slowly sufficating.
I am posioned!
Can no one save me?
Will no one calm my suffering?
As much as I scream no one listens.
Even my final wittness.
My dear friend laughs from the side lines.
Does no one care for this dying, lonely soul?
Mournig, pleding for help yet knowing no one will come.
I am forgotten and alone.
My Heart fineally gives in.
I fall into a deep sleep on my death bed.
The final resting place.
Where my forgotten soul goes now, no one knows.
There is no light at the end of the tunnel.
Slowly I vanish.
I am forgotten.
Alone in this darkness...
forever.
Published 16th Jun 2012
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16th Jun 2012 6:22am
16th Jun 2012 8:19pm
sorry...Its my first poem. I'll try to fix it. anyway thanks for thinking its awesome. i really apprceiate u takeing your time to read it. thanks again.
16th Jun 2012 5:26pm
That is real sad and I think it was well written.
It was sad to me in that it seemed you do not have the ability to end some thing which makes you miserable. I hope all turns out well for you in the end.
It was sad to me in that it seemed you do not have the ability to end some thing which makes you miserable. I hope all turns out well for you in the end.
16th Jun 2012 8:24pm
to be honest that wasnt how i felt when i wrote it but after reading ur comment i do think the same thing. thanks for understanding the message in this. also thanks for caring. not many do so its nice to no someone out there cares. btw thanks for reading and im glad u liked it
