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Dimming Light
Fireflies and dancing lights
Shooting stars
And candle light
Beautiful things
To light my way
In a night
So dull and gray
But as these pieces
Of my heart
Fall
And break apart
Each and every light
Dims and dies
So that my eyes
See only dark
Shooting stars
And candle light
Beautiful things
To light my way
In a night
So dull and gray
But as these pieces
Of my heart
Fall
And break apart
Each and every light
Dims and dies
So that my eyes
See only dark
Published 6th Mar 2010
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6th Mar 2010 2:34pm
..at the same time. These fifteen lines combine for an enjoyable read. Thank you, Aerial.
6th Mar 2010 3:36pm
Thank you A. To tell the truth I wasn't completely sure about this one myself I had to rewrite it 3 or 4 times before I got to this point and yet was still unsure of it but if you enjoyed it then I'm sure I can leave it as is for now.
7th Mar 2010 7:51pm
