eyes

Too much runing! (panting) I cant keep up!

RUN FATBOY RUN!!

well the running symbolizes how people are scared that isnt a joke and i dont find that funny this poem is how i feel, and i thought people could truly say what they felt on this website

Luna,

You experienced something very personal when you wrote your poem, those feelings just did  not get transported to me when reading it.

However, when you defended your poem as serious, you shed light for me of what your meaning was:

Running scared

If a wild dog was chasing me
I would run and  climb a tree

If the Devil was a mile away
I'd run to Church and Pray


But I am trapped
and running scared
I look in your face
the feeling is shared

Running from Terrors not understood
has befallen the  whole neighborhood

I force a smile to  hide my tears
A  dark phantom has gripped me in fears

I wish I could run and run to escape
someone out to murder and rape

I ache to run, but to where?

Who or What lurks out there?


---OK, thanks for your write,

Aloha

thank you very much that is almost exactly how i feel/felt. thank you sicerely your words were beautiful!!!

no

still sounds like plagerism to me.
http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric.nsf/Let's-Get-It-Started-lyrics-Black-Eyed-Peas/002C73D9BDE95CC948256EBE000E6A22

Luna: You said honest critique. That's what he honestly felt while reading it.

Deviant Tendancies: Don't be an asshole about it.

yes but still y wod u make fun of saying u didnt like it is different than mocking it and if u hav an issue with how i handled his comment well thht is too bad for u no one asked u to get invlolved with someone elses convo.

haha, she has a valid point!

thank you even the one who wrote the comment agrees with me!!!