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The start of a killer

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My heart pounding out of my chest.
Face redder then blood.
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My nails driven into my palms.
I see the source of my anger.

HEY BITCH!
HOW DARE YOU CHEAT ON ME WITH THAT DANM NO GOOD BACK STABBING LITTLE PRICK!

I hit her down onto the ground.
I pick up a hatchet and then.
One
Two
Three strikes with the hatchet.

I step back to see my mess.
Eyes widen with fear of what I done.
Blood everywhere
So much Blood the devil himself could not even handle.

I run away as fast as i can.
I put my left hand into my pocket and pull out a mini pocket knife.
I place it at my neck and run it through.

A feeling of warmth and fuzziness hits me.
Everything goes black.

Only for a short moment everything was calm.
The next moment intense heat hits me.
screams surround me.

THE  END
Written by John_Smith (SeansMind1994)
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