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Image for the poem 4.30am ~ room view of a motel car park

4.30am ~ room view of a motel car park

 
 
 
 
 
the silent,  
  nocturnal questions coil.  
 
 
a super8 film  
 plays on the chintz,  
it provokes, cushions,  then caresses;  
 like damaged lantern  
puppets,  
 like rhinocera restored in felt.  
 
So turn to nuzzle the quilt, and gnaw  
in pearl-light,  
  in starfish glare,  
see  
the moon blinks on and off, I swear.  
 
 
stand to - walk to the window  
   
as a fly  
desiring escape from a dollarstore tumbler.  
 
the fluorescent and neon  
     buzz of it all.  
 
fingering  
used floss,  
 sellotape holding up the wallpaper,  
   a flyer on local attractions.  
 
there are so many voices-opinions-caring hands  
 sending good vibes,  
improbable ideas for a heavenly hereafter,
 
 
but herein  
 
this night the passport is burnt, nameless,  
 
a dory  
   trawling a black river  
 candled  
   with glistening, crawfish eyes.  
 
So far down to dive,  
when the hook hits the back of the throat,  
 
snagged by the rising sun  
    to reel him in.  
Written by nomoth
Published | Edited 7th May 2025
Author's Note
expanded/edited Napo entry. image mine.
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