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Your Words
Your words showed me the way
Your words knew what to say
Your words won't let me forget you
I can't and won't let any of you go
Your words live in me
Your words are pieces of me
I can't and won't let any of you go
This was my illusion
This was my world
Always & Forever
RIP Deep Underground Poetry
May 12, 2025
Your words knew what to say
Your words won't let me forget you
I can't and won't let any of you go
Your words live in me
Your words are pieces of me
I can't and won't let any of you go
This was my illusion
This was my world
Always & Forever
RIP Deep Underground Poetry
May 12, 2025
Author's Note
Many people here have inspired me. Maybe it was their poem or story or just them as a person. This site made life as a writer, fun, informative and addicting. I wrote about 4 stories a day for over a year. Some of my stuff was crap, some were good and a few were great. Knowing now there's only 13 days left is heartbreaking. My mind isn't focused like it once was. I've tried numerous poetry sites. Some are better then others but overall, none of them have the magic DUP has. I'll probably stay around until the bitter end. More then likely, this will be my last poem on this site or any other site for a long time. If I find the right site to post my stories, then I may start writing again. Until then...Many of you can reach me through e-mail. We can always stay in contact. Peace & Love to all!
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Re. Your Words
Yesterday 1:16am
hello dearest Keith it will be a tough adjustment please don't quit writing...I get a lot of my motivation here to create so I feel you the place is magic 💕
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Yesterday 9:37am
Thanks Brenda. I'll see where that road takes me. I always appreciate your kind words my friend. xo
Re. Your Words
Yesterday 3:30am
Dear K,
You write the echo of most of us. I really appreciated this write of poignancy and loss of a life line. Amazing homage to a great place and wonderful people. H🌷
You write the echo of most of us. I really appreciated this write of poignancy and loss of a life line. Amazing homage to a great place and wonderful people. H🌷
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Yesterday 9:38am
Hello Honoria,
Thank you kindly my friend. It's been great here. I appreciate you and your wisdom.
Thank you kindly my friend. It's been great here. I appreciate you and your wisdom.
Re. Your Words
Yesterday 5:16am
Powerfully penned, Keith. All good things come to pass unfortunately, always a bump in the road, or the occasional nosedive off a cliff, but this place was one of a kind. Sometimes a break is necessary, in a moment of clarity, the path is revealed. At least that's my experience anyway. Hopefully I see you down the road brother. You got my email, and I have yours, stay in touch my friend. It's been an honor, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re: Re. Your Words
Yesterday 9:39am
Same here Damian. Your a great writer, poet & friend. We'll be in touch, for sure. Thank you. And remember...I appreciate you.
Keith
Keith
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Yesterday 9:33am
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Yesterday 4:23pm
There's nothing like DUP and it breaks my heart there's just 13 days left. By now 12 (that fucking countdown bar) This place was my inspiration, I didn't write since the news and I don't know if poetry returns or not.
Thank you for being here Keith, sharing your epic poetry, being a loyal supporter and a great friend.
Thank you for being here Keith, sharing your epic poetry, being a loyal supporter and a great friend.
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Re: Re. Your Words
Yesterday 00:02am
Thank you my awesome friend. I treasure you as a writer, a person and a huge inspiration!!
Peace!
Peace!
Re. Your Words
Yesterday 00:45am
a deeply emotive & a breaking piece of poetry this is dear Keith.. could feel each n every heavy swelling & crying bit & piece of words of you here .. of the DUs come across .. that's been inspirational, a light, a force, a power, a flowering breeze... & now all of a sudden, plucked off its beat n life.. could feel that in you stammering pen, from the same prolific versatile smooth ever pen of yours.. could feel the choking you & we are all in.. in inkless deaths & spiritless darkness.. prayers that we be here till the last split second of that endless end.. of this our home du .. will be here with you n all du .. that will be the lasting & greatest of all honour one can offer to this Motherly DUU in all love.. respects adorations love to you & all DU dear Keith .. hope we all find poetic abode as du if at all, & hopeful for our writing to be once again in epics of an incessant flow 🙏✍🤗💓
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Today 3:58pm
You silly man. Just join discord and we can can write poetry nonstop. Duhhhh! :P
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