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a morning to behold
clouds bloomed and sprinkled
cool dew drops,
as the sun emerged in a crimson robe;
the rosy aura smudged the periphery
like kohl spreads around eyes,
environs echoed with the
mellifluous music of birds
while the velvety breeze waltzed,
intoxicated with sweet aromas
of blossoming buds,
flirting with leaves
as it flowed along its drift.
sparkling streams gurgled
in kiddish merriment
savoring every droplets of drizzle,
while the leaves whispered
prayers to the universe,
as the trees meditated motionless;
a conduit-
channeling earth's energy to the cosmos...
cool dew drops,
as the sun emerged in a crimson robe;
the rosy aura smudged the periphery
like kohl spreads around eyes,
environs echoed with the
mellifluous music of birds
while the velvety breeze waltzed,
intoxicated with sweet aromas
of blossoming buds,
flirting with leaves
as it flowed along its drift.
sparkling streams gurgled
in kiddish merriment
savoring every droplets of drizzle,
while the leaves whispered
prayers to the universe,
as the trees meditated motionless;
a conduit-
channeling earth's energy to the cosmos...
Published 23rd Apr 2025
Author's Note
NaPo-day 23
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24th Apr 2025 5:39am
Beautifully penned, Dreamz. A lovely read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
24th Apr 2025 1:44pm
24th Apr 2025 7:30am
Lovely description of a dawn, kind of view I am seeing now from my front (east facing) room.
24th Apr 2025 10:23pm
Beautiful work, InDreamz, fresh from the pen. I am reading you for the first time, and seeing how much I have missed in 5 years. I am going to have to make a special effort to at least read all your NaPo poems, because I am intrigued by the trending of your thoughts and drawn by your obvious love for nature (also one of my passions).
Sincerely
Sincerely
25th Apr 2025 9:19am
Thanks a bunch ,dear poet . You made my day ❤️
Really grateful to you for your kinds words n a desire to invest your time in reading my work . So honoured, dear Cabcool🌹
Really grateful to you for your kinds words n a desire to invest your time in reading my work . So honoured, dear Cabcool🌹
25th Apr 2025 8:28pm
Did I know you here before, by your other profile? Seems so to me -- like you may have been FlowerGirl, or something...
I know your writing style and the nature of your responses. Please help me here.
I know your writing style and the nature of your responses. Please help me here.
25th Apr 2025 8:51pm
No...not flower girl...when I first joined dup i was Orenda ...next year l deleted my profile...re joined as Mystical Rose...then again deleted ....cause of deletion of both the accounts were that couple of poets here were harassing me... But i couldn't resist as loved dup so much ,so reincarnated as InDreamz
