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~a die-hard supernaturalistic love... this is
https://youtu.be/eDQPwBuJMrs
https://youtu.be/gL0z7S-PxVA?feature=shared
my sizzling young angelic beauty..
am just a flaming spirit orbiting you ..
vanished are those tears of love
..without you, am nothing…this now
(refrain)
my sizzling young angelic beauty..
am just a flaming spirit orbiting you ..
vanished are those tears of love
..without you, am nothing…this now
1.
poolside flowers bloom in my name
how can you my floral breeze… ever
forget this forever waiting me..
all over the riverine raised saintly mounds
& those amorphous sandy shores.. I draw
the embedded designs of our times of a past
yet now, am in search of you my divine jasmine..
a test of love is this... load my
tortured eyes in needling pain
as a wilting skylark I become..
mourns in a million modal
lamenting ballads. in tearing
sadness of your absence
my sizzling young angelic beauty..
am just a flaming spirit orbiting you ..
vanished are those tears of love
..without you, am nothing…this now
2.
in my still wet maggoty frothing ..
an unresolved shaded greyly grave..
how can just another man be conning me.
…to be sleeping dead, blinding you?
Is this a terrible twisting
an octopussy tentacled
my ill-fated destiny.. or
a tricky targeted blackly
enshrouding in an ambush, a
tainting sabotage in plotting?
my love my belongingness
you seem to be a dried out
holy Kaveri now.. how can
you ever hate your own
this beloved~ bonded spirited form,
this thickly following.. an essentially
condensing me in your aura?
a pitch dark magnetic.. Amavasya
no-mooning night this is .. profusely
salt-pitted & pooling in n-folds- these
tears half-rolling half-settling crusted
as gritty petite piercing grains of pain
erupting anaemic eyes & eroding
their hope-laden bloody red heme
..in this looming in mysterious
darkness, a virgin night..will you be
my lighted lamp of a refuge, my love
am a date that is just exhausting,..
am just a breed born to mere tears
.. you are my better half that I fuse
my sizzling young angelic beauty..
am just a flaming spirit orbiting you ..
vanished are those tears of love
..without you, am nothing…this now
..without you, am nothing…this now
..without you, am nothing…this now
Published 9th Apr 2025
| Edited 10th Apr 2025
Author's Note
Napo #9 Entry
an inspired lyrical .. of love .. of a supernaturalistic nature in the plotted story in the verses.. sadness-laden & a love-stricken spirit in search of its lover, love .. a wrathful spirit wandering in a searchful vengeance , for a revenge on its murderer .. such goes the plot of this a haunting supernatural Maestro ilayaraja's musical from 1983 Tamil Movie song linked below & top of poem (print bit bad).. that is inspirational for this write:)
https://youtu.be/eDQPwBuJMrs
Quickly reminded of another Maestro's 1989 fav supernatural movie song as below & pasted atop poem as second link:
https://youtu.be/gL0z7S-PxVA?feature=shared
Image: web
✍🙏🤗💗
an inspired lyrical .. of love .. of a supernaturalistic nature in the plotted story in the verses.. sadness-laden & a love-stricken spirit in search of its lover, love .. a wrathful spirit wandering in a searchful vengeance , for a revenge on its murderer .. such goes the plot of this a haunting supernatural Maestro ilayaraja's musical from 1983 Tamil Movie song linked below & top of poem (print bit bad).. that is inspirational for this write:)
https://youtu.be/eDQPwBuJMrs
Quickly reminded of another Maestro's 1989 fav supernatural movie song as below & pasted atop poem as second link:
https://youtu.be/gL0z7S-PxVA?feature=shared
Image: web
✍🙏🤗💗
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10th Apr 2025 00:08am
A heartfelt piece only you can write Uma. The words and the atmosphere in this delicate poem, shatter all walls and breakdown all barriers. Great poetry from a gifted writer. xo
10th Apr 2025 4:38am
Beautifully penned, Uma. Another fantastic read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
