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Deep Within
As my mind reflects
voices from within
tell me to soul search
a personal energy
that resonates
changing my perspective
as multiple beings
alert me when my time will end
voices from within
tell me to soul search
a personal energy
that resonates
changing my perspective
as multiple beings
alert me when my time will end
Published 30th Mar 2025
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30th Mar 2025 8:31pm
beautifully deep soul-searching traverse... in~of~for the One eternity... interestingly I put this eternity as against your last liner.. time seems just a notion for the minded world:) short yet deep xx
30th Mar 2025 8:32pm
30th Mar 2025 8:44pm
hello Keith this is deep my friend I thought I was the only one who heard such voices ❤️❤️by the way I'm listening to the song I want played when I die...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FFqb1I-hiHE&list=RDGMEMVs_68jiiAq2tp9FNi2GjtQ&index=2
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FFqb1I-hiHE&list=RDGMEMVs_68jiiAq2tp9FNi2GjtQ&index=2
30th Mar 2025 8:48pm
Thank you Brenda for the kind words and RL here. I hear them every so often.
Yes! I'm familiar with "The Band" and that track. Cool song to play when you die. Rock forever my friend xxxxo
Yes! I'm familiar with "The Band" and that track. Cool song to play when you die. Rock forever my friend xxxxo
30th Mar 2025 9:15pm
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31st Mar 2025 5:06am
Beautifully penned, Keith. Great fucking write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
31st Mar 2025 12:09pm
31st Mar 2025 2:30pm
What a profound piece, quite different from what we know from you, but I LOVE it.
31st Mar 2025 8:57pm
