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Overstimulated
Tormented soul in need of sleep
Bloodshot eyes beginning to itch
Broken promises often turn deep
A secret buried in a shallow ditch
Time has caged this lonely beast
Made him the shell he’s become
Stripped him bare before the feast
Overstimulated by pain until numb
Bloodshot eyes beginning to itch
Broken promises often turn deep
A secret buried in a shallow ditch
Time has caged this lonely beast
Made him the shell he’s become
Stripped him bare before the feast
Overstimulated by pain until numb
Author's Note
Late night musing. Just playing with word recipes in the kitchen tonight. Take care of one another. Appreciate you.
- Damian DeadLove
" It seems I've gained the world but have nothing
To keep tabs upon this loss isn't wasted time
Face opportunities to recognize now we have the time
Rebuke, don't choke on this twisted dream."
- Peter Loeffler
- Damian DeadLove
" It seems I've gained the world but have nothing
To keep tabs upon this loss isn't wasted time
Face opportunities to recognize now we have the time
Rebuke, don't choke on this twisted dream."
- Peter Loeffler
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Re. Overstimulated
Today 8:12am
Re: Re. Overstimulated
Today 10:29pm
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, MS. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. Ain't that the truth. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Overstimulated
Today 9:16am
Re: Re. Overstimulated
Today 10:30pm
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Pete. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. What can I say, I try. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re: Re. Overstimulated
Today 10:32pm
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. Glad you love the recipes. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Overstimulated
Today 11:17am
Re: Re. Overstimulated
Today 10:33pm
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Overstimulated
Today 11:22am
Brilliant things come out of that kitchen of yours. Love this introspective piece, my friend.
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Re: Re. Overstimulated
Today 10:36pm
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Duende. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Overstimulated
Today 11:50am
Re: Re. Overstimulated
Today 10:37pm
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Debbie. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. I'm glad. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re: Re. Overstimulated
Today 10:40pm
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Ambjr. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Overstimulated
Today 6:07pm
Re: Re. Overstimulated
Today 10:42pm
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tams. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. I love the phrase too. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Overstimulated
Today 6:29pm
However your words are pasted they always mirror so much and are a joy to read!
greetings and blessings
Rianne
greetings and blessings
Rianne
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Re: Re. Overstimulated
Today 10:46pm
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Rianne. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. Glad they're a joy to read. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Overstimulated
Today 9:32pm
Sometimes over-stimulation is great; too much, however, may not be. This poem stimulated thoughts...thanks.Hug and love. O
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Re: Re. Overstimulated
Today 10:50pm
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Oral. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Overstimulated
Today 9:39pm
Re: Re. Overstimulated
Today 10:53pm
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. Always honored to make your RL. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian