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The Caboose
She was on her way to the quickie mart
Picking up grape soda and some pop tarts
Would you believe she has no money
Figures, she works for a pimp named Sunny
She takes her earnings and blows it all away
Another Friday night, time to get laid
Two weeks later, Sunny is getting fed up
Time is money, she's taking a piss in a cup
Sick and tired of all the abuse
Her ass is referred to as "The Caboose"
How will she know when the time is right
Keep her in the dark, she's a fugly sight
Hopping on the train, leaving far from home
If Sunny finds out, he'll crack her over her dome
Fucking him over, he may search the town
The engine failed, the train broke down
She hopped off and walked the railroad tracks
Ten dollars to her name and small knapsack
Sunny found out she was on that train
The look in his eyes, clearly was insane
He caught up to her, pummeled her with his fist
When she was down, on her face he took a piss
He pulled her up by her greasy black hair
He said, "Run again, I'll kill you, I swear"
He squeezed her arm as they entered his car
He slapped her, abused her, noticeable were many scars
The next day she was back at work
Her first client wanted nothing more then a jerk
He did ask, "How much to fuck your caboose?"
She said, "Not today" and tied his neck with a noose
Because of Sunny, she took revenge on this man
Sunny is her actual father
She stabbed him ten times, drove off in his van
Sunny and his daughter never saw each other again
The end
Picking up grape soda and some pop tarts
Would you believe she has no money
Figures, she works for a pimp named Sunny
She takes her earnings and blows it all away
Another Friday night, time to get laid
Two weeks later, Sunny is getting fed up
Time is money, she's taking a piss in a cup
Sick and tired of all the abuse
Her ass is referred to as "The Caboose"
How will she know when the time is right
Keep her in the dark, she's a fugly sight
Hopping on the train, leaving far from home
If Sunny finds out, he'll crack her over her dome
Fucking him over, he may search the town
The engine failed, the train broke down
She hopped off and walked the railroad tracks
Ten dollars to her name and small knapsack
Sunny found out she was on that train
The look in his eyes, clearly was insane
He caught up to her, pummeled her with his fist
When she was down, on her face he took a piss
He pulled her up by her greasy black hair
He said, "Run again, I'll kill you, I swear"
He squeezed her arm as they entered his car
He slapped her, abused her, noticeable were many scars
The next day she was back at work
Her first client wanted nothing more then a jerk
He did ask, "How much to fuck your caboose?"
She said, "Not today" and tied his neck with a noose
Because of Sunny, she took revenge on this man
Sunny is her actual father
She stabbed him ten times, drove off in his van
Sunny and his daughter never saw each other again
The end
Published 5th Mar 2025
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5th Mar 2025 2:42am
Powerful write, Keith. Unfortunately, happens everyday. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
5th Mar 2025 11:15am
5th Mar 2025 11:36am
It's such a sad thing and it happens every day - and to young girls / kids too :-(
...Profound piece, my friend, I admire you for not shying away from difficult topics...
...Profound piece, my friend, I admire you for not shying away from difficult topics...
5th Mar 2025 11:40am
That is true. It's out there, it's real and it can be anywhere on earth.
Thank you for the grateful comments.
Thank you for the grateful comments.
5th Mar 2025 1:07pm
5th Mar 2025 1:10pm
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5th Mar 2025 3:38pm
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5th Mar 2025 3:53pm
5th Mar 2025 4:15pm
Well i guess it makes sense to pimp out your daughters. Then you don't have to kidnap anyone lol
5th Mar 2025 4:19pm
True. Or you pimp out your kid and kidnap their best friend. Two for the price of one!
5th Mar 2025 4:26pm
Well, the kid kinda kidnaps them for you by inviting them for sleep overs. No effort required
Bloody sad n violent state of affairs.. abuse in any form is unlawful n sin.. parental abuse is the worst n deeply disheartening .. fine engaging write dear Keith xx
btw .. havent known the title word .. was thinking it as sone portmanteau between cabbage & mongoose;) lol. Juz me . gotta know here the word better xx
btw .. havent known the title word .. was thinking it as sone portmanteau between cabbage & mongoose;) lol. Juz me . gotta know here the word better xx
6th Mar 2025 11:12am
Thanks Uma.
The caboose means your bum, cheeks, behind, fanny, butt, etc...
It also is referenced as the last railroad car on a freight train. That's where the crew usually resides.
Thank you my friend for the comments and feedback..xo
The caboose means your bum, cheeks, behind, fanny, butt, etc...
It also is referenced as the last railroad car on a freight train. That's where the crew usually resides.
Thank you my friend for the comments and feedback..xo
