Letters 3 (Harold)

The idea, determination and concept is great here. Narration and spoken word is much more difficult then us writing a poem or story. Hats off to you Fia for experimenting and executing a wonderful piece. xo

Thank you Keith, it really is not that easy, but I am trying. appreciate it;))

Heads on a pillow...wow....so sensual...Hugs and love, Oral

Thank you, Oral;)) xoxo

enjoyed this

Thank you, Ambjr appreciate it;))

 Hey, I can't read or recite aloud at all. I'm glitchy.  Lol. So I admire those who do. I do know that practice is everything (I did a few years of speech therapy. Yay).
 You did great! If anything, I'd add a little more fluctuations in your volume at critical areas. Like a bit of boldness. For emphasis.  
I love the word "melancholy", and you used it!  
  You are doing so well with your effectiveness as a poet. Keep it going.  

Thank you. I will keep practicing. I appreciate the advice. I have been reading out loud a lot, so I hope it helps me. Thanks Styx

Dear Fia.. am loving your passion n innovation in creating a different concept of expressing poetry . With your flowing silken voice  loaded with the story n its emotives at right pace n dose n a lil spice of your huskiness in that voice! Loving this..

will go through all others in this series sure .. Fabtab effort n it shows how this AV works such magic than just words.. power poetry! Xx

Thank you Uma. Like I said I am a work in progress. I do appreciate the support.

Like this so much.
It sounds like you have a story in mind, and you're considering whether to write it out or not.
Alternatively, I'd prefer to write it out.

Thank you Numer90

Your voice is so soothing Fia, I loved your rendering of the story ⚘️

Thank you, Jade I appreciate that

Beautifully penned, Fia. I left a comment on YouTube as well. I like how you changed things up a little this time. I really liked it a lot, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian  

Thank you that's cool:))