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Beware!!
Isolated house far from reach
Prophecy, torture and death unleashed
Life behind these walls
Demented voices call
Blood is all you crave
Mentally deranged & insane
Bodies hang from meat-hooks
Human flesh peeled and cooked
House by the cemetery
Basement is a mortuary
Walk among the tombstones
Rotting flesh, decaying bones
Some buried alive
No one hears their cries
Maggots pour in eating your flesh
A slow agonizing death
Insane family pray for their souls
Funeral’s over, the casket’s closed
Another victim buried six feet down
Beware!
They maybe lurking in your town
Prophecy, torture and death unleashed
Life behind these walls
Demented voices call
Blood is all you crave
Mentally deranged & insane
Bodies hang from meat-hooks
Human flesh peeled and cooked
House by the cemetery
Basement is a mortuary
Walk among the tombstones
Rotting flesh, decaying bones
Some buried alive
No one hears their cries
Maggots pour in eating your flesh
A slow agonizing death
Insane family pray for their souls
Funeral’s over, the casket’s closed
Another victim buried six feet down
Beware!
They maybe lurking in your town
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Re. Beware!!
Yesterday 2:20pm
Very cerebral. You gave me so many horror movies in one and I am chicken shit when it comes to horror, but you brought them to the page. nice
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Yesterday 2:26pm
This piece was influenced by the film Deranged from 1974. Check the film out. CLASSIC!
https://www.imdb.com/title/tt0071408/?ref_=nv_sr_srsg_0_tt_8_nm_0_in_0_q_deranged
https://www.imdb.com/title/tt0071408/?ref_=nv_sr_srsg_0_tt_8_nm_0_in_0_q_deranged
Re. Beware!!
Yesterday 5:03pm
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Yesterday 5:36pm
It's a great day but we need some gruesomeness in my stories/poems. You know that. Glad you enjoyed this...i think.
Re. Beware!!
Today 3:44am
Brilliantly penned, Keith. Love the horror film writes, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re: Re. Beware!!
Today 10:14am
I do too. Horror you can create such atmosphere and details. Thanks man.
Re. Beware!!
Today 9:59am
It is sad people are actually living in others basements against their will. Maybe houses with basements should have mandatory inspections lol
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Re: Re. Beware!!
Today 10:14am
I just had a inspection yesterday. They said everything looks great!
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Today 11:30am
Re. Beware!!
Today 10:35am
Inspection said all my hostages are in excellent condition and very well hung in the basement!
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Re: Re. Beware!!
Today 10:45am
HA! Perfect! I can count on you for a clean, immaculate appearance. Always keep it clean. No matter what your work entails.
Thanks man.
Thanks man.
Re: Re. Beware!!
Today 10:58am
And all my skeletons are properly labeled with certification of origin and expiration date. Bate's mother is my golden level.
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Re: Re. Beware!!
Today 11:18am
HAHA! I bet. Don't keep her near the window, move her to the porch for all to see.
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Today 11:30am
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Today 11:35am
Totally. St.Patrick's day is the next event over here in the US. You can dress her up in green. place shamrocks and lucky charms all over her head and body. Hell, her skin maybe already green from decay.
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Today 11:48am
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Today 11:51am
Absolutely. You inspired me to write a story with your colorful (green) comments! I'll let you know when it's finished.
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Today 11:52am