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Teenage Love
Love is flawed
Hate is pure
Real to me at least
I burn and destroy pop song lies in my room at night
People really listen to this shit?
Laughing uncontrollably on how weak and lame this crap really is
Thinking of poor, sad little boys and desperate, tragic little girls
Their cry eyed faces
Hard dick blueball realities
Soft-hungry pussies craving love
Their painful pathetic minds
Maybe they should collaborate and write love songs to the fucking moon
Hate is pure
Real to me at least
I burn and destroy pop song lies in my room at night
People really listen to this shit?
Laughing uncontrollably on how weak and lame this crap really is
Thinking of poor, sad little boys and desperate, tragic little girls
Their cry eyed faces
Hard dick blueball realities
Soft-hungry pussies craving love
Their painful pathetic minds
Maybe they should collaborate and write love songs to the fucking moon
Published 22nd Feb 2025
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22nd Feb 2025 5:04pm
True.. infatuated at that age.. that they name it love .. hungering just flesh n time kill .. you slapped hard n brutal against this in your verses Keith.. last two liners are a true fucking panacea ;) well done xx
22nd Feb 2025 5:13pm
Exactly. They have no clue. Someone should give them a reality check and tell them there acting like idiots. Thanks Uma xox
23rd Feb 2025 4:11am
Powerful write, Keith. Today's music is basically homogenized at best, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
23rd Feb 2025 11:13am
23rd Feb 2025 11:14am
23rd Feb 2025 11:18am
Thank you. Your a huge fan of good music. You know exactly what I mean. Pop songs are pathetic. The lyrics are disastrous. The music is an abomination. A slap in the face to real musicians, real art.
Appreciate the RL.
Appreciate the RL.
23rd Feb 2025 12:16pm
Those first two lines made me ponder...
...the music nowadays is just hollowed beats, made for the masses and the money I think.
Like you I don't understand why people listen to this shit, maybe I'm born too early.
Great piece of ink, Keith :-)
...the music nowadays is just hollowed beats, made for the masses and the money I think.
Like you I don't understand why people listen to this shit, maybe I'm born too early.
Great piece of ink, Keith :-)
23rd Feb 2025 12:21pm
Hello Duende. Nice to hear from you. Yeah it's all money. Sadly there's no real talent in any of this crap there making billions of dollars on. No need to worry, I was born too early as well. Nothing wrong with that my friend.
Thank you for the comments
Thank you for the comments
25th Feb 2025 1:53pm
25th Feb 2025 1:54pm
