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Imagery here is potent. When the bough broke.. Powerful write

Thank you, Fia

Oof, that's powerful. It really hits you with that raw feeling of struggling with painful memories. "Remembrance is a bitch" - yeah, I felt that. It's a really vivid portrayal of trying to hold on when everything feels like it's crashing down.

It's never like the sweet tune of lullabies. But it's certainly the recognition of the cradle falling, isn't it? Thank you, Mr Black

damn. that’s good. agree with mrblack…”Remembrance is a bitch” was hard hittin.

We age but we never really forget. Thank you, Ambjr

Felt your words Willow ♥️

Thank you, Pete

This is very clever, number one. You kept the focus so well. I love the message described within, too. What a great write for me to read this evening.

Thank you, Styxian

Powerfully penned, Willow. Into the list it belongs. Great read my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you, Damian

Wow, amazing how you convey so much in 12 lines.

"of lullabies gone awry" > such a painfully beautiful line.
...this piece hits hard, your words are deeply felt, sis 💖

When childhood is less than idyllic, we carry those memories like scars. They fade but don't go away. Sometimes they ache like fucking hell. Thank you, sis 💖