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Unable To Sting
While the irony rubs me wrong
It has ignited a raging fire inside
So you wrote a poem or a song
Intelligence is artificially implied
Grasping the definition of heart
But lacking soul to feel anything
Understanding doesn’t equal art
Empty words are unable to sting
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
It has ignited a raging fire inside
So you wrote a poem or a song
Intelligence is artificially implied
Grasping the definition of heart
But lacking soul to feel anything
Understanding doesn’t equal art
Empty words are unable to sting
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
Author's Note
Late night musing. After the AI discussion from my previous write, I was answering all your comments. I noticed the more I answered the more I got fired up about the subject. By the time I got to, Tams (Ahavati), and started to respond to her comment, some of the things I was saying clicked into a write. This one. Appreciate you.
- Damian DeadLove
" On a tour of one-night stands
my suitcase and guitar in hand
And every stop is neatly planned
for a poet and a one-man band."
- Paul Simon
- Damian DeadLove
" On a tour of one-night stands
my suitcase and guitar in hand
And every stop is neatly planned
for a poet and a one-man band."
- Paul Simon
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Re. Unable To Sting
19th Feb 2025 10:25am
Oh so true sire. This is what the world is leading to. No turning around at this point. Be passionate with your own material. In time only a few will be AI free.
I will be one of them. Great piece Damian.
I will be one of them. Great piece Damian.
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Re: Re. Unable To Sting
Yesterday 6:41am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. I'm glad you connected with the write, my friend. I hear you, I'll be one of them as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Unable To Sting
19th Feb 2025 10:31am
I'll keep this one short Damian haha or you'll get me writing another essay on it 🤣 anyways another great write about the subject ❤️
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Re: Re. Unable To Sting
Yesterday 6:43am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Pete. I'm glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Unable To Sting
Yesterday 4:02am
Inspiration comes from everywhere. Especially just talking will spark an ideas. The piece was well done.
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Re: Re. Unable To Sting
Yesterday 6:45am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. I'm glad you connected with the write, my friend. It can and does come from anywhere, inspiration is like that. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Unable To Sting
Yesterday 7:09am
Nice naked exposure of emotion and logic without it. Technicality and assumption are all that's wrong with AI. You can't understand the complexity and levels coming from experience, which makes it real in passing by of mind. With artificial premise, there's no heart. The words of an artist are always felt, which is not limited to logical induction. Understanding requires both with spirit, which can't be replicated artificially. Great write.
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Re: Re. Unable To Sting
Yesterday 8:33am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, brother. I'm glad you connected with the write, my friend. As usual you're spot on in your analysis. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Unable To Sting
Yesterday 10:02am
By now I have commented on your AI piece. It's amazing, isn't it, when a comment inspires a poem. Love this one, my friend, especially this line: "But lacking soul to feel anything"
"Intelligence is artificially implied" > and this line is so very clever. You have great skills, my friend :-)
"Intelligence is artificially implied" > and this line is so very clever. You have great skills, my friend :-)
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Re: Re. Unable To Sting
Today 3:34am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Duende. Always honored to make your RL. I'm glad you connected with the write, my friend. I love all the lines you mentioned, lol. Thanks so much for your continued support, I'm always smiling after I read your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Unable To Sting
Today 4:10am
Lol, when I initally saw the title, Damian, I read it as you were 'unable to sing' And I thought... that doesn't sound like Damian, unless he has a sore throat, of course! Very powerful last line. Only truth can ever truly sting. 😊
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Re: Re. Unable To Sting
Today 4:23am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Billy. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. Only the truth can sting, I wholeheartedly agree. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian