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Not Welcome!
Trees stare at angry clouds
Amidst the moon and light
You hear a scream echo
Left in a state of fright
The mist descending rapid
A stench of chilled air fear
Signs and wooden stakes
Read
YOU'RE NOT WELCOME HERE!
Amidst the moon and light
You hear a scream echo
Left in a state of fright
The mist descending rapid
A stench of chilled air fear
Signs and wooden stakes
Read
YOU'RE NOT WELCOME HERE!
Published 17th Feb 2025
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17th Feb 2025 1:06pm
A like how you have the tree staring at the angry clouds. Very vivid image.
17th Feb 2025 1:50pm
18th Feb 2025 00:01am
Brilliantly penned, Pete. Loved your imagery, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
18th Feb 2025 11:03am
18th Feb 2025 1:23am
18th Feb 2025 11:04am
18th Feb 2025 1:12pm
Hello Pete, this reads like an eerie haunted piece, best to read the signs and not feed the trolls, I mean those that dwell in that forest among those haunted trees, a lovely piece! Greetings and blessings, Rianne
18th Feb 2025 1:38pm
20th Feb 2025 10:11am
Love the dark, haunting vibe of this one.
...and love the idea of trees saying "you're not welcome here"
Great piece, Pete, like this one a lot 💚
...and love the idea of trees saying "you're not welcome here"
Great piece, Pete, like this one a lot 💚
20th Feb 2025 2:26pm
