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a sinister snowflake
wreath like her posture
is folded blanketed
around me
clearer now
my sister sits silently not
her searching hands
are always in motion
cooking soothing smoothening
clearing cleaning comforting
karmic ceramics carved
neath her finger nails
plumage plucked
her careful painted lips
are but a melody
once I asked her
if she could remember
the sea
her answer was
that she did not
remember the shore
we held shells
towards our ears
wandering echo
waning silence
her voice from the receiver
necromantic answers
are given to me
white white winds
have spoken
o my sister
we are bleeding
time is running
you were the fire
me the ice
o my sister
we are still breathing
under water
where
I hold you
now
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is folded blanketed
around me
clearer now
my sister sits silently not
her searching hands
are always in motion
cooking soothing smoothening
clearing cleaning comforting
karmic ceramics carved
neath her finger nails
plumage plucked
her careful painted lips
are but a melody
once I asked her
if she could remember
the sea
her answer was
that she did not
remember the shore
we held shells
towards our ears
wandering echo
waning silence
her voice from the receiver
necromantic answers
are given to me
white white winds
have spoken
o my sister
we are bleeding
time is running
you were the fire
me the ice
o my sister
we are still breathing
under water
where
I hold you
now
copyrights © owned by Rianne 2025
all rights reserved
Published 16th Feb 2025
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touching.. the elements you channelise n meld . in the perceptions of the loved ones .. dear R .. & amazing is how you actually sync n perceive them n the soul in them speaking to you .. i totally lived thus , but he last two stanzas too much .. that it reminds of a beautiful supernatural film that us my too fav ever .. # Talaash ( where the lead actress in her spirited form afterdeath .. leads the lost living soul of a protagonist man .. to help her deathful mystery to be justified .. as also she helps him underwater as an angel swimming towards him.. to rescue him.. when he gets stuck there innner vehicle submerged to death. You are a magical poetess n soul dear R sx
17th Feb 2025 5:57am
Thank you dear Uma for your much appreciated words. And for sharing the part where you are describing the scene of one of your favorite films. It sounds like a good resemblance indeed to the narrative of this poem, greetings, much love and blessings to you, Riannexox
16th Feb 2025 8:49pm
17th Feb 2025 5:59am
Hello Pete,
nice to see you visite for a read, thank you for your words, much appreciated! Greetings love and blessings,
Rianne
nice to see you visite for a read, thank you for your words, much appreciated! Greetings love and blessings,
Rianne
17th Feb 2025 3:02am
17th Feb 2025 6:00am
Always lovely to see that avatar of yours Damian, thank you for your words, greetings love and blessings, have a good day, Rianne
17th Feb 2025 6:05am
That's... haunting. It feels like there's a lot unsaid, a lot of pain and a really deep connection. It's really evocative.
17th Feb 2025 6:20am
Indeed so MrB, I have a very good connection with both my brother and my sister. We are three apples from the same tree each fallen in a different direction, some things are to be understood others need to be accepted or perhaps if possible spoken about, Thank you for stopping by.
greetings, much love and bright blessings to you, Rianne
greetings, much love and bright blessings to you, Rianne
18th Feb 2025 12:00pm
This holds all the precision and dissection of Plath for me. Good to see somethings aint changed in this place. Wob
18th Feb 2025 12:06pm
Wob mi dear friend great to read from you, and thats a hellofa compliment, Plath is still untouched. Hope you are faring well in your hatful of hollow, great user name! Love and blessings,
Rianne
Rianne
