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Meadows
Your flowering wet meadows
reflected, wonder glinting in green eyes,
stumbling arms wrapped in
gentle padows,
tender individual silky drying strands,
elevate every blissful kiss of hair
fingers trembling, marks my scars bare.
reflected, wonder glinting in green eyes,
stumbling arms wrapped in
gentle padows,
tender individual silky drying strands,
elevate every blissful kiss of hair
fingers trembling, marks my scars bare.
Published 15th Feb 2025
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16th Feb 2025 9:05am
That's a really sensory and intimate poem. It's got a dreamy, almost hazy quality, and the mix of vulnerability and tenderness is very evocative.
