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First and Last
Are you ready to listen?
There's no running away!
What is said here and now,
Will forever stay.
I was broken,
Yes I was!
You can deny it all you want.
You saw something,
Gave me a chance.
Now I am standing before you,
A new romance.
I don't know what I'm doing.
Don't laugh please!
Didn't bring you flowers -
I remembered you have allergies!
I thought of chocolate,
Didn't think that was you.
So I stand here before you...
Totally confused!
There's no running away!
What is said here and now,
Will forever stay.
I was broken,
Yes I was!
You can deny it all you want.
You saw something,
Gave me a chance.
Now I am standing before you,
A new romance.
I don't know what I'm doing.
Don't laugh please!
Didn't bring you flowers -
I remembered you have allergies!
I thought of chocolate,
Didn't think that was you.
So I stand here before you...
Totally confused!
Author's Note
Whoever said love was straightforward anyway! 🤣
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Re. First and Last
14th Feb 2025 6:36pm
It's thoughts that counts how much love you think of someone upon this Earthly day of remembering that GOD ALMIGHTY will send to you that what you want and need in your life and world and dreams ❤️😇🌹💌💪💯
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14th Feb 2025 6:38pm
Re: Re. First and Last
14th Feb 2025 6:53pm
Know matter what you may go through don't give up on hope and prayers and dreams for I am a firm believer that no one is sent to you by chance or accident 😔 For sure if you keep telling thyself that what you think that you start to believe that for you are truly blocking your chance to be happy with someone who doesn't believe in what you say that it can happen for you just stop and look and listen to your heart 💖 that you will find there is someone just for you as there is someone for everyone even you 💕👍💌
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Re. First and Last
14th Feb 2025 6:49pm
Love can be seriously fucked up. lol keep at it <3 Its worth it in the end with t he right one.
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Re: Re. First and Last
14th Feb 2025 6:52pm
Re. First and Last
14th Feb 2025 7:02pm
its the confusion that makes it fun.... if it was predictable it would be a drab ... ok how about handcuffs in a gift box?... will those do?
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Re: Re. First and Last
14th Feb 2025 7:04pm
The last time you forgot the keys, Sam. Don't mind being cuffed when it's your turn, but how you lose the KEYS.
Re. First and Last
14th Feb 2025 7:21pm
Love is a strange thing. Easier to write poems and stories then to deal with it in reality. Great piece Fia..xoxox
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14th Feb 2025 7:36pm
Re. First and Last
14th Feb 2025 9:26pm
Beautifully penned, Fia. It's far from straightforward a lot of the time. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re: Re. First and Last
14th Feb 2025 9:27pm
Re. First and Last
14th Feb 2025 9:54pm
Love this! The gentleman in the picture does look rather difficult to please & even harder to read, haha! You do pick 'em, don't you, Fia?! I thought I was bad! I'm only teasing. 😆 😉
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Re: Re. First and Last
14th Feb 2025 10:29pm
Re. First and Last
15th Feb 2025 00:38am
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15th Feb 2025 00:47am
Re. First and Last
15th Feb 2025 2:08am
Nicely done queen beautiful ink spill your so right at times love can be so confusing wouldn't you agree!!
Please keep on writing ok queen peace and blessings always shalom!
Please keep on writing ok queen peace and blessings always shalom!
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15th Feb 2025 2:09am
Re. First and Last
15th Feb 2025 4:04pm
Somewhere caught between the first and last, there is still a possibility that the best exists, so grab IT. Hugs and love...xxoo
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15th Feb 2025 4:06pm
Re. First and Last
15th Feb 2025 10:21pm
Aw, that's sweet and awkward in a really relatable way. It's like watching someone's nervous energy spill out, and you can't help but root for them. The allergy thing? Definitely a human touch. Makes it feel real.
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15th Feb 2025 10:23pm