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Yester now
my shallow gasp
getting faint
your mellow whisper
in crescendoes
tears you see
love's love
flowing conscious
your memoirs
grief you suffer
the span
of a falling leaf
to earth
pollens travel
jubilee birth
a flower withers
a cycle served
mors inevitabilis est,
et hora ejus incerta
vigor afterglow
the sun had past
let it go
sleep to my lullaby
curious stallion
galloping with grace
stumbles upon a lovely view
her stride slackening
da-dap da-dap
the sound
slowing down
it was yester now
getting faint
your mellow whisper
in crescendoes
tears you see
love's love
flowing conscious
your memoirs
grief you suffer
the span
of a falling leaf
to earth
pollens travel
jubilee birth
a flower withers
a cycle served
mors inevitabilis est,
et hora ejus incerta
vigor afterglow
the sun had past
let it go
sleep to my lullaby
curious stallion
galloping with grace
stumbles upon a lovely view
her stride slackening
da-dap da-dap
the sound
slowing down
it was yester now
Published 25th May 2012
| Edited 27th May 2012
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Hey Fred, I'm not really sure what this poem means, it reads a little abstractly to me, but in saying that I like it and you shouldn't change the concept. It makes the reader think, and I felt a melancholy beauty in it, though the English could be tightened a little better in verses 1, 3 and 7 for clarity and flow.
Peace, Indie. :)
Peace, Indie. :)
27th May 2012 6:49am
27th May 2012 10:59am
27th May 2012 7:37pm
pleas don't try2makeSense on myaccount...eye love it
just thee way it are
peaceUp
dkzk
just thee way it are
peaceUp
dkzk
