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There is an old soul
who's picked up the flame.
Sitting and watching
the sun go down
on the other side of the mountains,
Down, down, down,
It looks as though it's burning.
Published 11th Feb 2025
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12th Feb 2025 5:26am
Dear P,
I really enjoyed the many images I saw in this piece. It made me think of poets all over the world. We all see the sun but it’s how we interpret it poetically that links us together in a continuous manner. Lovely write. H🌷
I really enjoyed the many images I saw in this piece. It made me think of poets all over the world. We all see the sun but it’s how we interpret it poetically that links us together in a continuous manner. Lovely write. H🌷
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