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YOU'RE IN CONTROL (POLE DANCER)
You're in control
and on a roll.
You have his soul
you can cajole.
Swing on the pole.
and on a roll.
You have his soul
you can cajole.
Swing on the pole.
Published 6th Feb 2025
Author's Note
First line was the poetry prompt. Only realised at the end I had depicted a pole dancer with my choice of rhyming lines.
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9th Feb 2025 1:54pm
9th Feb 2025 4:49pm
There may be a double meaning there. Perhaps she graduated from the dancing pole to pole position with her one man audience.
9th Feb 2025 4:52pm
22nd Feb 2025 12:32pm
