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Existential View
Largely the troubles of this life
Burning fires of struggle and strife
In this life, there seems to be time
Between the start and finish line
Delusion feeding illusion
Everyone always dies alone
Is it music or just a tone
Dancing to the rhythm of life
Celebration of no real strife
Forever living in this time
One moment it's all on the line
Jubilation of exaltation
Realizing you're never alone
Legacy built on a milestone
Everybody is the same
But from various viewpoints
Burning fires of struggle and strife
In this life, there seems to be time
Between the start and finish line
Delusion feeding illusion
Everyone always dies alone
Is it music or just a tone
Dancing to the rhythm of life
Celebration of no real strife
Forever living in this time
One moment it's all on the line
Jubilation of exaltation
Realizing you're never alone
Legacy built on a milestone
Everybody is the same
But from various viewpoints
Published 3rd Feb 2025
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3rd Feb 2025 00:56am
3rd Feb 2025 2:54pm
I think to qualify for Beautiful, I would have to have a dog or at least a coffee mug.
27th Feb 2025 2:13pm
I love the title. I really like how each sentence ended with same tone in both paragraphs but different meaning. Gave different viewpoints and made me think. I read a couple of your poems, and I really like the way you write and flow.
2nd Mar 2025 2:17am
Thanks, I read your first 6 and think I can see your style. I believe you have a beautiful soul forged in adversity. You write with emotion, I am more chaotic, but it's enlightening to see from other viewpoints.
2nd Mar 2025 2:25pm
Awe.... I see someone gets it. Looking forward to getting to know you more through yours.
