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The Rising Sun

The rising sun
 
Whispers of a slow and steady defeat
Shadows crept on my lonely street
But as the dawn begins to creep
A promise stirs beneath my feet
Mmmmm
 
Darkness fading as a new day awakes  
(a new day awakes)
Hope finds the fear it breaks
In strength my heart is unchained
No more sorrow, no more pain
No more pain
Mmmmm
No more pain
Mmmmm
 
My nights were long and filled with doubt  
How many echoes screamed, I lost count  
Morning light has shown my pain a new route
Reclaiming my courage I’m watching my dreams mount
Mmmmm
 
Darkness fading as a new day awakes  
A new day awakes  
(a new day awakes)
Hope finds the fear it breaks
In strength my heart is unchained
No more sorrow, no more pain
No more pain
No more pain
 
From the ashes I rise
Hope a new day, glimmering in my eyes
Battered and broken, but no more lies
My soul is mending, the ultimate prize
Mmmmm
 
Darkness has faded as a new day awakes  
(a new day awakes)
(a new day awakes)
Hope finds the fear it breaks
In strength my heart is unchained
No more sorrow, no more pain
No more pain
Mmmmm, mmmm
 
Whispers of a slow and steady defeat
Mmmmm
The sun has risen on my lonely street
Mmmmm
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