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Anxiety
She told me while we were at a cafe eating lunch, that the way I live my life would make her head explode
She can't handle more then one thing at a time, due to her anxiety
I told her that I would pay her $200 dollars to see her head explode
She said today was my lucky day, pulled out a gun and shot herself in the head
Part of her head exploded onto the wall and our table
Instead of $200, I placed a $100 in her bra, since I only saw part of her head explode
I got up, paid the cashier and left
She had guts but no brains, literally
She can't handle more then one thing at a time, due to her anxiety
I told her that I would pay her $200 dollars to see her head explode
She said today was my lucky day, pulled out a gun and shot herself in the head
Part of her head exploded onto the wall and our table
Instead of $200, I placed a $100 in her bra, since I only saw part of her head explode
I got up, paid the cashier and left
She had guts but no brains, literally
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A chilling and morbidly subtle exploration of anxiety and the extreme reactions it can provoke. The juxtaposition of a mundane setting—a cafe lunch—against the sudden, violent act creates a stark contrast that heightens the impact. Busting my head from laughing so much.
Yesterday 11:30am
HA! I hope your head didn't get too busted. I need your brains in tact, so you can continue writing exquisite poetry. Thanks my friend.
Yesterday 2:10pm
This is disturbing on so many levels, lol
You are the reigning king of brains being blown
out.
You are the reigning king of brains being blown
out.
Yesterday 6:55pm
I have written about brains a little too much, haven't I? I don't know.
Glad to know this was disturbing. Thank you Debbie.
Glad to know this was disturbing. Thank you Debbie.
Oops this is what happens when you take idioms too literally!
Your creative mind is extraordinary!
Your creative mind is extraordinary!
Yesterday 6:55pm
Yesterday 10:41pm
Clever write, Keith. I agree with Debbie, people do blow their brains out a lot in your writes. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Today 00:16am
I know. There seems to be a pattern, which wasn't arranged. I guess I love splattered brains! Thanks Damian.
