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Let's talk
Tell me what you need
Tell me what I can’t see
The pain that lies beneath
The pain cannot be explained
It rolls endlessly in my brain
Tell you…
For what?
It’ll drive you insane.
No, talking will not help me
I can't tell you
Then you will see
The damages
The cracks
That is deep in me
Talk to you?
You’ll run from me
Your that light
The one that helps me at night
It’s dark here
Laying alone, I fear
Emotions
Mimicking the dark color of the sky
I can take it a little longer
I am stronger
I will say this
I will survive this
Don't do that dear
Shed a tear
I’m damned if I do and damned if I don't
I simply won't
One day this cage will open wide
When I cannot hold it inside
Then and only then I will talk
No more pressing, going for a walk
Tell me what I can’t see
The pain that lies beneath
The pain cannot be explained
It rolls endlessly in my brain
Tell you…
For what?
It’ll drive you insane.
No, talking will not help me
I can't tell you
Then you will see
The damages
The cracks
That is deep in me
Talk to you?
You’ll run from me
Your that light
The one that helps me at night
It’s dark here
Laying alone, I fear
Emotions
Mimicking the dark color of the sky
I can take it a little longer
I am stronger
I will say this
I will survive this
Don't do that dear
Shed a tear
I’m damned if I do and damned if I don't
I simply won't
One day this cage will open wide
When I cannot hold it inside
Then and only then I will talk
No more pressing, going for a walk
Published 19th Jan 2025
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20th Jan 2025 9:51pm
Powerful write, Fia. Into the list it belongs. I liked this a lot, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
20th Jan 2025 10:00pm
Ahhh, the confusion & complexities that relationships can throw up. Knowing when to talk & when not to. Being damed if you do & don't. It's all here. Very bleak. The photo just adds to the overall feeling of despair also.
21st Jan 2025 9:05pm
Thank you I wanted to capture that feeling. Appreciate that you comment on this, Billy
22nd Jan 2025 11:53am
The trials & confusion of love, sigh... love the vulnerability of this piece.
"One day this cage will open wide" > and what a beautiful day that will be 💕
"One day this cage will open wide" > and what a beautiful day that will be 💕
22nd Jan 2025 12:23pm
