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A Deathly Balcony
‘A murder of crows, I saw on her breast!’
Our vicar said to us.
‘That room enough was on her chest
Proves that Satan gave her that bust!’
Our vicar said to us.
‘That room enough was on her chest
Proves that Satan gave her that bust!’
Published 12th Jan 2025
Author's Note
Yes, it’s a bad joke about big breasts. Don’t judge me. You were like me once, probably when you were 12.
(Picture isn’t mine, can’t find an original credit for it, but based on style and substance I’m guessing it comes from a newspaper.)
(Picture isn’t mine, can’t find an original credit for it, but based on style and substance I’m guessing it comes from a newspaper.)
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12th Jan 2025 4:02pm
lol! As a member of the, ahem, athletic-sized boob community, I caught a chuckle at the joke.
Cute stuff.
We should all have the mentality of a 12year-old-boy. It’s the secret to evil glee, which is pretty much happiness.
Cute stuff.
We should all have the mentality of a 12year-old-boy. It’s the secret to evil glee, which is pretty much happiness.
12th Jan 2025 11:28pm
This reminds me of Picasso's comment about learning to be a child again. I think he would agree it belongs in poetry just as art.
13th Jan 2025 00:35am
Dear CR,
I really enjoyed the humor in this write. Just the ticket for this evening. H🌷
I really enjoyed the humor in this write. Just the ticket for this evening. H🌷
