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Winter Glow
Where the pathway ends,
there i'll go,
Up the hillside, it bends
where soft winds blow
And the fresh growing grass
so ripe and mellow,
And the river flows
so quite, down below
It's like heaven has landed
from seven skies above
and the landscape, painted
This is Eden, aeons ago
"It is morning
and it is mist
It is the beginning
of all celestial bliss"
Comes the cold dawn
my flame will grow
To warm the weather
and weather the snow
On the tip of a time
sleet and snow
And light a pyre
let my winter glow
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Published 8th Jan 2025
Author's Note
please, listen to this music, divine melodies
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8th Jan 2025 6:19pm
As you have mentioned before we can create our own seasons fill our souls with our own reasons.. we can build our own world and carve our own words that would convey all that is in the heart and mind.. You have created your own winter, warn and glowing adorning it with a so divine music! Wonderful poetry! Always an immense pleasure reading you.. Stay always blessed and happy.
9th Jan 2025 11:57am
Gladly grateful you spared a moment for my humble words, my friend. you have a predilection akin to mine regarding music and
nature, as they sound alike, giving peace, harmony and serenity
to the mind and spirit....Poetry must be music and vice versa.
Thanks heaps for your feedback, Hamid
nature, as they sound alike, giving peace, harmony and serenity
to the mind and spirit....Poetry must be music and vice versa.
Thanks heaps for your feedback, Hamid
19th Jan 2025 12:41pm
19th Jan 2025 12:49pm
I highly value the time spent to read my humble words, my friend.
Graeteful abd happy you found somethin enjoyable..
Have good times, blissful moments this sunday.Hamid
Graeteful abd happy you found somethin enjoyable..
Have good times, blissful moments this sunday.Hamid
