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Hope
if i could have been
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if i could have been
what if
i could
have been
a different
child, a
different
seed in
another
garden.
Written by
goodwolf1966
(jimmy)
Published
6th Jan 2025
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what or who would i be today? better or worse?
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#courage
#emotions
#happiness
#hope
#strength
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Re. if i could have been
Her
6th Jan 2025 11:44am
In my experience, this question is not only futile, it brings endless pain.
Instead, ask how you can fertilize yourself despite the soil you've been placed in.
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Re: Re. if i could have been
goodwolf1966
(jimmy)
6th Jan 2025 4:42pm
thank you Her
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Re. if i could have been
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
6th Jan 2025 12:15pm
We all ask ourselves this question. There is no answer to it. I agree with Her with this.
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Re: Re. if i could have been
goodwolf1966
(jimmy)
6th Jan 2025 4:43pm
thank you fia
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Re. if i could have been
DamianDeadLove
(Damian DeadLove)
8th Jan 2025 6:12am
Some paths are less ventured than others. This is one to avoid my friend. Powerful write, Jimmy. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Re: Re. if i could have been
goodwolf1966
(jimmy)
8th Jan 2025 8:40am
thank you Damian
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