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quick, another double ..
being architecturally and
mentally a ruin, and yes I know a ruined
castle can be beautiful,
but I was never a castle,
and what remains of me
is quite simply rubble ..
Published 5th Jan 2025
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5th Jan 2025 1:39am
5th Jan 2025 5:31am
I can relate, Paul. Reflective write. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
5th Jan 2025 6:44pm
a ruin is a ruin is a ruin dear poet.. a ruin or rust or all the warring warrioring brave damages .. are ever arting & beautiful.. as are you .. fine write & could feel what you say though ..
5th Jan 2025 6:44pm
I'm guessing, amongst the rubble, there are plenty of wondrous archaeological finds.
5th Jan 2025 11:22pm
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