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3:15 AM
You're alive but in this room you're a ghost
The last few nights you have come to haunt me
It's 3:15 am
The room is getting smaller
I think about what they did to you
I tried to make you see that I was different
Maybe you saw something I didn't see
Perhaps you saw them in my eyes
I'll never see you again
It's never been the same
I feel like I have failed
So old & final
This night breaks Father Time's nose
The last few nights you have come to haunt me
It's 3:15 am
The room is getting smaller
I think about what they did to you
I tried to make you see that I was different
Maybe you saw something I didn't see
Perhaps you saw them in my eyes
I'll never see you again
It's never been the same
I feel like I have failed
So old & final
This night breaks Father Time's nose
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3rd Jan 2025 3:04pm
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3rd Jan 2025 3:19pm
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3rd Jan 2025 3:17pm
hello dearest Keith this is haunting it happens to me alot I play out old events in my life things I could have done better this is great ❤️
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3rd Jan 2025 3:19pm
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3rd Jan 2025 3:22pm
oh no my nights can be rough because I always dream and I go to strange places with strange beings who seem to know me...
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3rd Jan 2025 3:24pm
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3rd Jan 2025 3:34pm
I do sometimes...sometimes you are talking to these beings directly as I channel them...
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4th Jan 2025 3:40am
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this is masterful in your pen Keith.. esp.
‘Maybe you saw something I didn't see
Perhaps you saw them in my eyes
I'll never see you again
It's never been the same’
very unsettling very truth.. that feels I could or not many could have expressed that well n striking ..
write on friend xx
‘Maybe you saw something I didn't see
Perhaps you saw them in my eyes
I'll never see you again
It's never been the same’
very unsettling very truth.. that feels I could or not many could have expressed that well n striking ..
write on friend xx
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4th Jan 2025 5:26pm
Happy to hear that you had a connection to this poem. Awesome! Thank you for the kind words & RL entry.
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5th Jan 2025 9:19am
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5th Jan 2025 12:20pm