once a black moon

the darkness .. holds more than the light ..the sacred blackness of a new moon or the black hole .. has much symbolisms  as you say here Rianne.. loved the atom lily white afloat pint of dot … as one searches n finds little revelations of self of cosmos..  fine write xx

Thank you, dear Uma for sharing your thoughts and wise reflections.
Darkness holds more than the light indeed!  Many bright blessings
Riannexo

Beautifully written, Rianne. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you much Damian!

This poem is a mesmerizing and I read it thrice trying fully grasp it's aura and depth of chosen vocabulary

Written elegantly with grace while portraying mysticism and invoking mindful imagery,  driven by your profound introspection along with an ability to carefully thread the cosmos into your intimacy, so much beauty filled in evocative lines makes this an astounding piece of art .

The transition from Lilith's enigmatic power to the purity of a floating atom is especially captivating as it captures a sense of transformation and duality.

Beautifully written—thank you for sharing this piece!

Malcolm
Xx

Dear Malcolm,

Thank you for the feedback on this piece, It came from a place of listening, a place of quietude , one of those pieces that just writes itself out on the blank page,  
be well
x
Rianne

Rianne,

This is a delicately textured and cosmic poem. Loved this from opening to closing. There is the magic of transformation when atoms float like dancers in a midnight ballet. There is wonder here to behold and I am enchanted.

John

Hello John,

Thank you for your encouraging words and feedback on my poem!
Actually this one is a bit dear to my heart, its more than just a poem.
Glad you observed the enchantment! Blessings and greetings
Rianne