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Under my skin
Here you are again
Under my skin
I thought it had thickened
But with you It's razor thin
Those eyes pierce through
And I can't think
When you breath my air
My heart just sinks
Just do it quickly
Make it painless
No need to pick up any shards
We both know you will do it
And we both know I will let you
Just quickly break my heart
You are the winner
You get everything
I am defenseless
Here you are again
Under my skin
Under my skin
I thought it had thickened
But with you It's razor thin
Those eyes pierce through
And I can't think
When you breath my air
My heart just sinks
Just do it quickly
Make it painless
No need to pick up any shards
We both know you will do it
And we both know I will let you
Just quickly break my heart
You are the winner
You get everything
I am defenseless
Here you are again
Under my skin
Published 24th Dec 2024
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25th Dec 2024 8:14am
Hello,
There was an overal sad aftertaste , a deep mellancholia that was draped around each stanza like a dark veil.
It felt pretty intense, thank you for sharing, greetings
Rianne
There was an overal sad aftertaste , a deep mellancholia that was draped around each stanza like a dark veil.
It felt pretty intense, thank you for sharing, greetings
Rianne
