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Deserted
Sonoran desert
sparse like you
unsentimental wishes
alluring invitation
cancelled party
sparse like you
unsentimental wishes
alluring invitation
cancelled party
Published 22nd Dec 2024
Author's Note
First and only attempt at gogyohka, from a few years ago.
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22nd Dec 2024 4:30am
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22nd Dec 2024 7:26am
Dear PD,
Consider me schooled. I’ve never encountered this style of poetry but I’m intrigued and like the format of it. Its directness gave me pause and then made me feel like there was excitement with some disappointment mixed in. Not unlike any given day. Great style, excellent write. H🌷
Consider me schooled. I’ve never encountered this style of poetry but I’m intrigued and like the format of it. Its directness gave me pause and then made me feel like there was excitement with some disappointment mixed in. Not unlike any given day. Great style, excellent write. H🌷
28th Dec 2024 00:47am
22nd Dec 2024 10:25pm
Ooh, I like that...
I felt that.
I need to go learn me that...
(is the teacher in you cringing?)
I felt that.
I need to go learn me that...
(is the teacher in you cringing?)
28th Dec 2024 00:52am
Just don't use double negatives and we're fine.
Have fun experimenting with this style- just five short phrases.
Have fun experimenting with this style- just five short phrases.
