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I DO NOT MIND
Tease me my love
I do not mind;
take me to the edge
to see what I'll find.
Tickle me my love
I do not mind;
I love to laugh
and have a good time.
Humor me my love
I do not mind;
give me a riddle
the answer I will find.
Chase me my love
I do not mind;
I'll let you chase me;
so then you'll be mine.
Do ANYTHING you want
I really do not mind;
each moment we spend together
is exciting and one-of-a-kind.
YES!
Even THAT I do not mind
I do not mind;
take me to the edge
to see what I'll find.
Tickle me my love
I do not mind;
I love to laugh
and have a good time.
Humor me my love
I do not mind;
give me a riddle
the answer I will find.
Chase me my love
I do not mind;
I'll let you chase me;
so then you'll be mine.
Do ANYTHING you want
I really do not mind;
each moment we spend together
is exciting and one-of-a-kind.
YES!
Even THAT I do not mind
Published 20th Dec 2024
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21st Dec 2024 3:57am
Dear TO,
I enjoyed the lyrical formatting through the poem. For me, the repetition of “I do not mind” reinforces the vast love and I think that’s so lovely. H🌷
I enjoyed the lyrical formatting through the poem. For me, the repetition of “I do not mind” reinforces the vast love and I think that’s so lovely. H🌷
21st Dec 2024 4:33am
Thank you for your gracious comment' appreciated very much. Hugs and love, Oral
