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The Real Thing!
This feels like the real thing!
So much so, it makes my heart Sing!
Girlfriend so wet, she starts to ring!
The absence of our lust still burns and stings!
This feels like the real thing!
Five foot eight, one-hundred fifty eight pounds and strong!
Girlfriend takes it all night long
Enter her temple and make her sing a song!
This feels like the real thing!
You lick my lips and then my clit
Girlfriend starts trembling,
She’s about to lose her shit!
This feels like the real thing
Bend me over, go for the gold!
Girlfriend stays hot and never gets cold
Juicy secrets behold!
This feels like the real thing
Handcrafted cock-tails; poured nice and slow
Girlfriend’s garnished by the cock
Allowing fervent passions to flow
So much so, it makes my heart Sing!
Girlfriend so wet, she starts to ring!
The absence of our lust still burns and stings!
This feels like the real thing!
Five foot eight, one-hundred fifty eight pounds and strong!
Girlfriend takes it all night long
Enter her temple and make her sing a song!
This feels like the real thing!
You lick my lips and then my clit
Girlfriend starts trembling,
She’s about to lose her shit!
This feels like the real thing
Bend me over, go for the gold!
Girlfriend stays hot and never gets cold
Juicy secrets behold!
This feels like the real thing
Handcrafted cock-tails; poured nice and slow
Girlfriend’s garnished by the cock
Allowing fervent passions to flow
Published 20th Dec 2024
Author's Note
Crushing on my boo-thang!
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A poem to encourage the lover to 'get stuck in' and make it happen for her. Favourite lines:
Enter her temple and make her sing a song!
This feels like the real thing
Bend me over, go for the gold!
Enter her temple and make her sing a song!
This feels like the real thing
Bend me over, go for the gold!
20th Dec 2024 6:21pm
16th Feb 2025 00:42am
That's...intense and direct. It's definitely not subtle. It's very focused on the physical aspects of a passionate encounter, and it's got a strong, almost aggressive energy.
