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Pills
Felt real bad
Couldn't carry
The overwhelming
Pressure
On my own
Anymore
So I started
Popping pills
Thought I'd feel better
But I really don't
Oh, what is there
To do?
Pop some more
Drug my brain
Until I can't think
Anymore
Oh no
There must be
Another way
To do it
But can I
Really do it?
Am I stronger
Than these thoughts?
"Don't give up"
Said she
And I'm really trying
If not for my sake
Then for yours
Couldn't carry
The overwhelming
Pressure
On my own
Anymore
So I started
Popping pills
Thought I'd feel better
But I really don't
Oh, what is there
To do?
Pop some more
Drug my brain
Until I can't think
Anymore
Oh no
There must be
Another way
To do it
But can I
Really do it?
Am I stronger
Than these thoughts?
"Don't give up"
Said she
And I'm really trying
If not for my sake
Then for yours
Published 19th Dec 2024
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19th Dec 2024 7:56pm
darkness is a dark that lingers even in good times .
it's like drink if you don't learn to control it you go over the edge
I've ended up in very dark places was there a Yr ago but I'm still here
it's like drink if you don't learn to control it you go over the edge
I've ended up in very dark places was there a Yr ago but I'm still here
20th Dec 2024 10:27am
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19th Dec 2024 11:53pm
I'm like this with weed at the moment. Miserable with, miserable without.
It can be a hard spiral to break out of, but it's possible.
It can be a hard spiral to break out of, but it's possible.
20th Dec 2024 10:29am
20th Dec 2024 1:17am
Yes, you are stronger
More isn’t going to make you feel better. I think you know that. I think you know that more is going to make it harder to stop, harder to get your life back, harder for you to get past the reason you started popping pills in the first place.
Girl, I read your poetry.
I read this poem.
Keep trying. You don’t want to give up.
If you can’t do it for yourself at the moment then do it for someone else until you can.
Write it out - we’re here.
We hear you.
More isn’t going to make you feel better. I think you know that. I think you know that more is going to make it harder to stop, harder to get your life back, harder for you to get past the reason you started popping pills in the first place.
Girl, I read your poetry.
I read this poem.
Keep trying. You don’t want to give up.
If you can’t do it for yourself at the moment then do it for someone else until you can.
Write it out - we’re here.
We hear you.
20th Dec 2024 10:31am
Oh, you don't know how much your comments mean to me, truly ❤️
Thank you so much for supporting me, I really appreciate it.
Thank you so much for supporting me, I really appreciate it.
20th Dec 2024 10:35am
It’s my pleasure.
You can DM me anytime you need a friendly ear or someone to chat with. And I mean that, truly💕
You can DM me anytime you need a friendly ear or someone to chat with. And I mean that, truly💕
3rd Jan 2025 2:16am
I had a Xanax prob for few yrs almost died a few times and then I found a reason to want to quit. And been clean for almost 7 yrs. I hope you achieve that as well.
